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"Never Enough"


(@lostbeggining)
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Song i wrote this morning after something happened. Feel free to comment.

Never Enough

V
All of the things
That this life promised
All seem so far away
Behind the concrete walls
The streets they call
To take me back again
The fountain of youth is poisoned
With the mistakes we have made
Built the path for a precious soul
But i cant stand the pain

C
Its never enough untill the time
That there is to much to take inside
Im just hoping this wont last for long

V
Making your way
Through every stage
Of this cold and bitter life
Never gave you a chance
But i know that its hard
Maybe theyll undestand in time
We feel all we never knew before
And the wind still blows as strong
And all of this will fade away one day
When you find where you belong

C
Its never enough untill the time
That there is to much to take inside
Im just hoping this wont last for long

B
There is so much more
Out there somewhere
Theres all your waiting for
If you let time take you there

C
Its never enough untill the time
That there is to much to take inside
Im just hoping this wont last for long

Rain Shadow


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(@alangreen)
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Well, it reads ok, but I'm struggling - what's it about?

Best,

A :-)

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(@lostbeggining)
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If im being honest....now this is not literally the connectin with me but....Its about teenage pregnancy n how can restrict ppl.......

Rain Shadow


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(@musicmaniac221)
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thats an interesting topic to write about...I like this one though...when it rhymes it rhymes well...great job man. I like the lines. all of them, lol. i really like the song. i was puzzled about the theme but u explained it so its good now. keep writing ur heart man.

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