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(@musicmaniac221)
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Well here is one that I wrote awhile back again. This is about a girl committing suicide and the boyfriends reaction...(I have no experience with this situation) I just wrote what I thought would be good...my songs arent great...im only 14...gimme a break! lol...Reviews will be returned ASAP

Wake up

Tonight your gonna' break (You're gonna' break)
I'm gonna be the one to know
What you did
I saw the gun
In your hand
Saw it shaking
…SHAKING

[Chorus](x2)
Wake up, wake up!
You don't have to do this
Wake up, wake up!
Why are you doing this?

This isn't the way to go
This isn't the way to release your pain
What happened to you?
What went wrong with you
To drive you to this?
(Going to add more)

[Chorus]
Wake up, wake up!
You don't have to do this
Wake up, wake up!
Why are you doing this?

Now I see, the blood on the floor
Your lifeless body drops
I force back the tears
The tears inside of me
You could've saved yourself
Why did you have to do this?

[Chorus]
Wake up, wake up!
You don't have to do this
Wake up, wake up!
Why are you doing this?

Yeap, so there it is...as I said...Reviews returned ASAP.

Do what you love, love what you do
http://www.acidplanet.com
-Nick


   
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(@guitargeek)
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Joined: 19 years ago
Posts: 281
 

i like this....its got something about it, i like it better than your other song you posted


   
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(@musicmaniac221)
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Joined: 21 years ago
Posts: 148
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thanks man. I'll review you now seeing I have time. THanks for the review.

Do what you love, love what you do
http://www.acidplanet.com
-Nick


   
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