Hi all,
This is sposed to eb quite light hearted, with regard to whats happening in this song. It's not a social comment.... I'll be interested to see who gets the references in it!
Night Air
The evening is boring,
The books are unread,
The bedroom is empty,
The atmosphere's dead,
So I pull the curtains,
I let in the night air,
I open the window,
And take it all down,
The TV is useless,
The games are all played,
Everyone's sleeping,
There's nothing to say,
So I pull the curtains,
I let in the night air,
I open the window,
And take it all down,
It's still way too early,
I'm so wide awake,
I'm restless and listless,
It's too much to take,
So I pull the curtains,
I let in the night air,
I open the window,
And take it all down,
It's feels all better now,
My eyes are all glazed,
The TV seems awesome,
The plotlines all blur,
Cos' I,
Pulled back my curtains,
Let in some night air,
Breathed it in deeply,
Sucked it all down.
"You got the heart kid... but you don't got the tools no more....."
"DRAGOOO!!!!!!!!"
I like it!
Only thing though is the rhyming structure from verse to verse seems to vary.
These two verses don't rhyme like the others:
The TV is useless,
The games are all played,
Everyone's sleeping,
There's nothing to say,
and
It's feels all better now,
My eyes are all glazed,
The TV seems awesome,
The plotlines all blur,
So I pull the curtains,
I let in the night air,
I open the window,
And take it all down,
The sequences of events don't fit. They seem almost backwards.
The thought process is there, but the execution is lacking.
