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(@Anonymous)
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Here's my latest offering, thoughts comments etc. appreciated as allways.

Verse1

You make me crazy with the.…
The shine of your hair
You drive me insane with your….
Your longing, brown-eyed stare

Bridge

But there's something
About you
That I can't
Place my finger on

It's a secret
That you've kept
Bottled inside
For just too long

Chorus

But now I see right through you
Straight past your eyes
And you don't have a clue

You think that I can't read you
Like an open book
Now I know the truth

Now I know the…

Verse 2

Past behind you is gone..
Gone but not forgotten now
Why don't you let your guard down?
Why is it so wrong to care?

Bridge

But there's something
About you
That I can't
Place my finger on

It's a secret
That you've kept
Bottled inside
For just too long

Chorus

But now I see right through you
Straight past your eyes
And you don't have a clue

You think that I can't read you
Like an open book
Now I know the truth

Now I know the truth
Now I know the….

Bridge 2
The feeling cold inside
Is freezing over your pride
But you no longer have to hide

Chorus

‘Cos now I see right through you
Straight past your eyes
And you don't have a clue

You think that I can't read you
Like an open book
But now I know the truth

Like an open book
But now I know the truth

Like an open book
But now I know the

Truth.

Pete :)


   
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(@barnabus-rox)
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Wow Pete

very impressive do you have chords mate ?

Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am


   
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(@Anonymous)
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Cheers Hilch!

I don't have chords at this point, although I have in mind a punk-ish sounding, greenday/offspring/blink182 kinda vibe.

Im hoping to get some alone time with the electric tomorrow, so I'll see what happens then........

Pete


   
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(@nolongerme)
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Posts: 475
 

Hey Pete!

I really like the bridge...the chorus is great too.


   
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(@margaret)
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Posts: 1675
 

10141748,

Cool lyrics!

Looking forward to hearing it.

Margaret

When my mind is free, you know a melody can move me
And when I'm feelin' blue, the guitar's comin' through to soothe me ~


   
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(@portia)
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Posts: 179
 

I really love this ... would love to hear it. It's a bit vague as I find myself wanting to know a little more what the 'truth' is ... but it works anyway.

good job
:) Portia


   
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