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(@crkt246)
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this is a song i wrote. the 2 sed one i posted thank you for your time :D God Bless

headin up from the red river valley
he's goin to see his bride he hasint
seen her since july and he can't wait
to get back in her arms.

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He's been over the mountain down in the valley
heck he's almost touched the sky
and he's bit the drit onece or twise before
and I am sure there'll be another time.

Down in New Orlean's and down on his luck
he to find a place to stay he ran across
a gamblein man who anserd his prayer

Chorus

He's fineily back in Tennisee
back to see his wife now
he's home again and happy to kiss her good night.

Chorus


   
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(@elecktrablue)
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No offense intended, but spelling is one of my pet peeves. I corrected your spelling mistakes below and put it in an actual song format to make it easier for others to read.... (I hope you don't mind!) :D

Headin' up from the Red River Valley
He's goin' to see his bride
He hasn't seen her since July and
He can't wait to get back in her arms

Chorus

He's been over the mountain
Down in the valley
Heck, he's almost touched the sky and
He's bit the dirt once or twice before and
I am sure there'll be another time

Down in New Orleans and down on his luck
He (tried) to find a place to stay
He ran across a gamblin'man
Who answered his plea

Chorus

He's finally back in Tennessee
Back to see his wife
Now he's home again and
Happy to kiss her goodnight

Chorus

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-:¦:- ((¸¸.·´ -:¦:- Elecktrablue -:¦:-

"Don't wanna ride no shootin' star. Just wanna play on the rhythm guitar." Emmylou Harris, "Rhythm Guitar" from "The Ballad of Sally Rose"


   
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(@crkt246)
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No I don;t mind at all and thank you for puting it in song format( I don't how know to put it in song format) :D and thank's again God Bless


   
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