the strangest month i can remember
there was a heat wave in middle december
then it snowed on christmas eve
it gave me a reason to believe
that something good might happen
before the year is gone
this is the first time that ive seen you sober
in the better part of a year
its not the first time that ive been over
but its the first time ive liked it here
and i do believe its safe to call you a friend again
its nice to have a friend again
people change like the seasons
unexpected and without reason
sometimes its nice to remember
how it was in november
when things were easy and everything was going our way
i have a picture framed in mirrors
its been hanging in my room for years
it reflects all the things that we once had
and it makes me sad to see that they are gone
but its time to move on
people change like the seasons
unexpected and without reason
sometimes its nice to remember
how it was in november
when things were easy and everything was going our way
the strangest month i can remember
there was a heat wave in middle december
then it snowed on christmas eve
it gave me a reason to believe
that something good might happen
before the year is gone
people change like the seasons
unexpected and without reason
sometimes its nice to remember
how it was in november
when things were easy and everything was going our way
looking for some feedback and or critisism
hey swansong,
this is a really well written song. My only suggestion would be to make the second verse "this is the first time..." an outro, reason being, it feels like the conflict present in the rest of the song has been resolved.
Aside from that, i really like it
look forward to seeing more
sozay
currently number 60 in total posts... and shooting for number 1!!
hey! i really like it its very good and nice idea which works, the only part i had a prob with was the flow of
people change like the seasons
unexpected and without reason
i think its a great line and the main message of the song but it just sounds like it should be...
people change like the seasons
unexpected without reason
just in my head taking out the 'and' sounds so much better!
When I started reading this, I didn't think I was going to like it, but it won me over. I agree with Sozay's suggestion, but I think this really solid. Nice job, Swansong.
