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(@jonsi)
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This is a song I just wrote, inspired by the comic King by Ho Che Anderson. The Chorus is a quotation from that comic. I got so inspired by it, that I wrote this one:

King

Chorus:
Why you standing in the shadows?
Come where I can see you!
Troublemaker! Troublemaker!

Verse 1:
Where clothes that make you shine,
draw their attention to you!
Look straight into their eyes
and be proud like a king!

Chorus:
Why you standing in the shadows?
Come where I can see you!
Troublemaker! Troublemaker!

Verse 2:
Don't respect their order,
if they don't respect you!
Leave your fist in your pocket,
but let your mouth talk loud!

Chorus:
Why you standing in the shadows?
Come where I can see you!
Troublemaker! Troublemaker!

Bridge:
Step out into the light!
You belong in the light!
Be a troublemaker!
If there's no room for you,
be a troublemaker!
If there's no room for you,
be a troublemaker!
If there's no room for you,
be a troublemaker!

Chorus:
Why you standing in the shadows?
Come where I can see you!
Troublemaker! Troublemaker!


   
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(@blacktears343)
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I dont know the comic but i like the song... I think im going to look up the comic and read a couple so i get more of it...

<3 Jes


   
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(@jonsi)
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Thanks BlackTears343!

The comic is about Marthin Luther King and is written by Ho Che Anderson. But my lyric is not necesarily about Martin.


   
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