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(@mysticmoonangel)
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I went back at this one for a few days and made a few changes
please leave your comment good or bad thanks

mystic :wink:

Life So Complicated

VERSE 1
She raised her self from a little girl
An only child in a mixed up world
Her momma wasn't there
Her daddy didn't care
Oh no

CHORUS
She doesn't know why
She doesn't have any shoes
Or why her clothes don't look so new
She doesn't like the guy
Who comes out at night
An says he can make everything alright

VERSE 2
She finds her self in a lonely world
A messed up head
And her own little girl
Her daddy wasn't there
Her mama didn't care
Oh no

BRIDGE
She finds herself on familiar streets
Beggin for money or something to eat
They pass her by
She doesn't know why
Her life so complicated

INSTERMENTAL BREAK

OUTRO
She doesn't know why
She doesn't have any shoes
Or why her clothes doesn't look so new
She doesn't like the guy who comes out at night
And says he can make everything all right
No she doesn't know why
They pass her bye
Her life so complicated
Her life, life so complicated

© Debbie Alaric


   
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(@nolongerme)
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Hey I really like this! i'm not a girl, but i grew up in a similar situation. Good Work!!!


   
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(@mysticmoonangel)
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Thanks james

:D

sorry to hear you had to experiance that way of life
at the age of 16 I moved from bc to nb ,I was close to being on the streets after a year of having nothing I called my sister and she got me a bus ticket home :D

seasons greetings
mystic


   
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