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(@nitetrapper)
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v1
If you ask me where I'm going
I'll tell you where I've been
I cant predict the future
Tho I try to now and then
v2
This solo life i choose to live
Has keep me happy and content
Sure i've had my ups and downs
But theres nothing I resent
chorus
Yes I am a solo man
I life each day for myself
No responsibility for any one
In povertey or wealth
Moneys done more harm than good
In this life I've chose to live
If I could live without it ,no question that I would
I will help you if I can
And not expect a thing
I'll move on as fast as I can,cause I'm a solo man
v3
Iv'e had my share of women
When the need would arise
Most times we used each other
When theres a need to comprimise
v4
Like a lobo wolf I roam
Alone across this vast land
No regrets for this life I chose
The life of a solo man
chorus
Yes I am a solo man
I life each day for myself
No responsibility for any one
In povertey or wealth
Moneys done more harm than good
In this life I've chose to live
If I could live without it ,no question that I would
I will help you if I can
And not expect a thing
I'll move on as fast as I can,cause I'm a solo man

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(@snoogans775)
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I enjoyed all the verses, but I found the chorus a little boring, no twists or spins on the concept

I don't follow my dreams, I just ask em' where they're going and catch up with them later.
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(@gmilam)
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Good song.

In verse 4 you say:

Like a lobo wolf I roam

You wouldn't say Like a wolf wolf I roam, so just making it spanish still seems repetitive to me. Maybe a descriptive term of the wolf (Nomad, wanderer, etc) might feel better.

I don't think I'm a lot dumber than you think that I thought I once was - White Goodman (Dodgeball)


   
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(@snoogans775)
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I've seen lobo used as an adjective, as if it were an english word

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(@gmilam)
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It may have been used that way before...but it just seemed a little confusing to me. The dictionary lists it as a noun for wolf.

But anyways...rules can always be broken....If you feel it, write it.

Peace out....

I don't think I'm a lot dumber than you think that I thought I once was - White Goodman (Dodgeball)


   
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(@nitetrapper)
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I was always under the impression that a lobo wolf was a loner. A lone wolf with no pack. Take care Nite..........................

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