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(@poeticsmile)
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You, I and Someday

There is good in the rain
Why don't you say, why don't you say the same?
There is peace and understanding
That's what I see in the rain
Why don't you say, why don't you say the same?

There is happiness in the dark
Why don't you feel, why don't you feel the same?
There is solace and belonging
That's what I see in here
Why don't you feel, why don't you feel the same?

I will show you, I will show you some day
In the dark, or in the rain
I will show you some day

Sunshine

Its been dark here for ages
I don't know when, or if it ever ends
The sunshine, it must be hiding until I wake up again

There's a lady creeping in the shadows
Saying she's ready for me to step forward
But me, I just want to go home
When is it right to just say, " no more?"

Her voice is getting louder and I'm finding less places to hide
When is it over?
Is it ever over?
Come on, Sunshine.

I'm losing my distance, just like I'm losing my beer
She's been plotting my murder for years

Come on, Sunshine
Come on, Sunshine
Let's see you shine
Just one time
Come on, Sunshine
Let's see you shine

Written by: River Kurdt


   
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(@nolongerme)
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Joined: 19 years ago
Posts: 475
 

Nice job PoeticSmile. As usual these are quite unique and I like that. What kind of music do you have to go with them?


   
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(@barnabus-rox)
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Just a thought

why not try to tie the 2 together ..

Start with the rain theme ( with in that tie in "Come on, Sunshine ")

And finish it off with some sunshine ..

Just a thought

Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am


   
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