"the beneath"

I've been writing a good amount recently but haven't posted anything on here. I thought maybe you guys could take a look at one of my new songs, "the beneath."

You can hear it here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=awWYevJtEr4

And here are the lyrics:

there's always the question of who then what
if you're giving up if you're giving up
if the sun still rises but you never settle down
then i'll stick around til the morning comes
and i know it's hard but i'll stay by your side
then you almost died and i got so scared
i said look at the sky one day we'll go there
and lose all of these cares that are dragging us down

beneath the stars beneath the sheets
oh what's the difference if i cheat
beneath the stars beneath the sheets
oh what's the difference if i cheat

why was i so quick to forgive you
when the things you do just feel so bad
i gave up on myself a long time ago
but you'll never know exactly why
cause neither do i maybe there's no reason
maybe it's just the season with the rain falling down
it catches on my face and i taste it on my lips
then i'm sinking like a ship and it's freezing cold

beneath the stars beneath the sheets
oh what's the difference if i cheat
beneath the stars beneath the sheets
oh what's the difference if i cheat
beneath the stars beneath the sheets
oh what's the difference if i cheat
beneath the stars beneath the sheets
oh what's the difference if i cheat

if you got the conscience to care
just know that i've lost mine, i'm happy to leave you there
i've been standing in place for a long time and now i think i'll go
but i don't think i'll tell you that way you'll never know

beneath the stars beneath the sheets
oh what's the difference if i cheat

(ignore the lack of capitalization please :) )