The Hated Mind
(verse)
Everybody, everybody, everybody… what the fuck are you waitin for?
Everybody, everybody, everybody… tell me what you're livin for
Where am I?
Where am I?
Everybody is ruined
(chorus)
Die! What you're livin for 2
Die! What you're livin for
Die! What you're livin for
Destroyed
(verse)
1 2 3 you're knocked the fuck out
Pinned, you're caught, run, no doubt
Find, steal, and run, you're already called out
Understand the criminal mind!
Understand his cell, before you step in
His life is shit, nothing to lose; you've got everything he wants
Be careful what you choose.
(chorus)
Die! What you're livin for
Die! What you're livin for
Die! What you're livin for
Destroyed*
(verse)
He's stuck… no one to forgive him
You stare… trying to understand him
Knife in hand, bloody and torn
Life misunderstood, destroyed by the fuckin law
Anticipate the anticipated
Fight and understand what you've created
Understand that this man is fuckin hated
(chorus)
Die! What you're livin for
Die! What you're livin for
Die! What you're livin for
Destroyed*
(bridge)
Death.
Pain. 2
Law.
What the fuck are we livin for?
This life-
Is fucked-
This world- 2
Has run outa luck!
(chorus)
Die! What you're livin for
Die! What you're livin for
Die! What you're livin for
Destroyed*
I love Slipknot, Korn, System of a Down, Ill Nino, Fear Factory, Statc-X, Machine Head, Mudvayne, DevilDriver and South Africa's greatest metal band Seether.
OK .. guess I'm gonna be the first to "dive" into this one. Well, besides listening to Tool - metal is not my cup of tea. Tool isn't really metal anyways I guess ...
My point being ... I don't know what my point is. I'm not sure what your point is either. Okay .. you're pissed .... life sucks ... why should people even live? Fine. I can understand and relate to that. But tell us more.
There better be some damn good guitar riffs to this song ... because they are gonna have to carry it. You weren't shy when it came to swearing in your lyrics .. and I don't have any bone to pick with cussing in song lyrics. Take a look at John Lennon's "Working Class Hero". But then why the hell did you use "poop"???? It can't be a hardcore metal song with the word POOP in it ... period. Change the word .. send me some good guitar riffs and maybe I'll have more to say. Until then, welcome to GN forum and keep up the writing!
I'm not writing this post to be funny or to make fun of the song. I'm just saying I don't see the point in it ... the lyrics feel empty to me. If you have an .mp3 of the song ... bring it on! I'd like to see how it comes together.
If you type in sh*t without the "*" but with the "i" it automatically changes to poop
Oh .. shit ... my bad. LOL. Sorry man... just send the guitar riffs then. :)
:D HAHAHAHAHA........poop's a funny word. Anyway, I think you got caught doing something ilegal and you were pissed. I have an ungodly amount of songs that I've writtin in this exact situation (I've been to juvi 7 times, 2 in-patient months at a hospital for the criminaly insane, and then 3 months at boot camp...and I'm only 17!) Life's a bi*tch, but the best teacher is experience. I've learned that songwriting is the best therapy I have. So, if your lyrics make you feel better, than more power to ya!!! I like your stuff, Diluted. Different from the others and not afraid to post their poop. Keep it up!
There's a thin fine line between hate and rage.
Now watch the line be crossed and break!
