The Story Of A Singer

Here is a song I've just this second wrote. But due to the fact that I wrote it in twenty minutes I will probably hate it tomorrow. I am trying to get back into songwriting and need all the help I can get.

Here it is.

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The Story Of A singer

You came to me in summer
And you left me in the spring
(But) There were years before our parting
And the beauty of a ring

I'll never feel the moment
Of joy that you could bring
And i'll never have the courage
That made me want to sing

(You see) I used to be a singer
And a writer in my prime
(But) That left with you so long ago
(And now) I'll never find the reason or the rhyme

I woke up in the evening
Of a brand new century
All this talk of resolution
Made me think what used to be

So against my better judgement
'Cos i love you all the same
I ran my trembling fingers
Across the grooves that spell your name

(I said) i used to be a singer
When your arms were open wide
But now i see the wisdom
Of the tears that i have cried

I never will forget you
But immortalise in song
The story of the singer
And the fool that went so wrong

So now i am a singer
And the world can sing along
To my snapshot of disaster
And how it went from sorrow in to song

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Your thoughts and comments appreciated.

Pete. :)