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(@lwj001)
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There's A Full Moon Above My Shoulder (Larry W. Jones 07/12/2007) (song#4780)

There's a full moon above my shoulder
And an empty feeling down in my heart

The days are now getting colder (thanks to barnaBus Rox for revision on these verses)
Now that you and I, dear, are far apart
You went away ,It was in the month of June
And you promised that you would return soon
I've waited so patiently for many a full moon,
With an empty feeling down in my heart

There's a full moon above my shoulder
And an empty feeling down in my heart
There's a full moon above my shoulder
And an empty feeling down in my heart

- instrumental -

I feel my dreams are now getting older
And I wonder if you will do your part
Will you return, dear, or will you decline
My heart burns, dear, for you to be mine

There's a full moon above my shoulder
And an empty feeling down in my heart
There's a full moon above my shoulder
And an empty feeling down in my heart

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(@jaa9270)
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it sounds too much like john denver's "sunshine on my shoulders"


   
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(@lwj001)
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Yeah, but that's the "bad moon rising" above my shoulder,
not rocky mountain sunshine.

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lwj001 howdy ..

I have a little bit of trouble with this :

You have :

The days are now getting colder
Now that you and I, dear, are far apart
It was in the month of June that you went away, dear
And you promised that you would soon return
I've waited so patiently for many full moons, dear
With an empty feeling down in my heart

I suggest :

The days are now getting colder
Now that you and I, dear, are far apart
You went away ,It was in the month of June
And you promised that you would return soon
I've waited so patiently for many a full moon,
With an empty feeling down in my heart

Just a suggestion , I really like the chorus

Trev :wink:

Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am


   
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(@lwj001)
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Hey, BarnaBus RoX, many thanks. Your revision is much better.
I revised the lyrics right away. Thanks again. I appreciate it.....LWJ

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No problems my friend

Like I said just my opinion

Trev

Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am


   
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