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Third song attempt (Hi-Ho, Hi-Ho)

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MetalWerk2
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Trying to mix up the rhthym a bit with a light hearted, Disneyish song. Hope you like...

Hi-Ho, Hi-Ho
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You're trudging to work, day after day,
Week after week, year after year.

And you stare at your screen, and you're half asleep,
And you hide in grey cubicle walls.

You dream of excitement, like everyone else,
But you have a job review that you fear.

The only highlights of your dreadful day,
Is your donut and pacing the halls.

Wake up!
You're a prisoner who thinks he is free.
You're life is a dream that you'll never escape.
You're already dead, can't you see?

Seventeen years, three months, and two days,
And you can retire like the rest.

You can play shuffle board and shoot golf all day,
And peak up an old lady's dress.

But the truth of the matter is you will get fatter,
And your Judas body will betray you.

You'll be hooked to machines, drinking horrible liquids,
Asking, "What was my life all about?"

Get up!
You're a prisoner who thinks he is free.
You're life is a dream that you'll never escape.
You're already dead, can't you see?


   
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rejectedagain
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like this one too. you are not at all a bad song writer keep going. and posting now that you know you wil at least have my input.


   
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MetalWerk2
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I trashed this one too. I thought, "this sounds like I puked on the page cause I was bored."


   
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