untitled song, haven't been here in a while,plz critique

Nice song, I really like it. I can kinda hear the song in my head and I can kinda get the bridge to. the endin is kinda weak but I like the repeation youve got. Keep up the good work. ja got some nice stuff goin.

No offense taken, happens all the time when people can't see me, then if they can see me then they're like, nope, she's a chick, but it's just my personality after hanging out with about five guys everyday for seven years, and occasionally now...you know, but it's not like I don't have any girl-_friends, I just relate more to guys, I mean seriously, who likes pink anyway? It's a shame I am wearing pink and black right now, every time I say I hate pink, I'm always wearing it!! :roll: oii!

Thanks, I got another song comin', just have to post it, but I'm still gonna work on this one... :P

Why are you avoiding me,
Is it something I said,
Well you can't blame me for lovin you,
Cuz I fell on my head again,
And you can't say I didn't try,
To just be your friend

Don't blame me for lovin you,
Cuz I don't anymore,
I kept tryin to be nice to you,
Got kicked out your door again,
What is it your tryin to avoid,
Think you fell back in love,again

Don't hate me for lovin you,
It's nice until it ends,
And I'm not sorry if I pissed you off,
Just tryin to be friends, but,
I'm sick of you always pushin me out your door,
Cuz I'm not your boomerang,
I'm not flyin back anymore

Bridge (Viola, drums, guitar, unwritten)

Why are you still flirting here,
Is it something I said,
You can go flirt with other girls,
Cuz that's all you did, anyway,
And they can tell that I don't care,
I'm not comin' back

Don't blame me for hatin' you,
It was nice till the end,
And I'm not sorry that I dumped you,
Just wanted to be friends, but,
I'm not gonna put up with jerks anymore,
Cuz I'm not your boomerang,
I'm not comin' back anymore

Hope it's better, plz critique