Hey, been ages since i posted last.been busy with college etc.........wrote this early today actually...........
Waiting For You
Let the fear sink through the ground
Flow silently through the cracks
Lay wait in the place we found
The way that we could make it back
Round the corner from the light house
In a place we will never know
We can hear all the haunting sounds
The screams of every fading ghost
So dont leave this place
Untill you know where you need to go
So stay here for a while
Till you teach me how to be alone
And these tears fill my eyes
And reflect all of our past
And i can see the roads of time
As they slowly break apart
Shimmering with the streetlights
That used to lead our way
And the glow of each moment
From our everlasting flame
Dont leave this place
Untill you know where you need to go
So stay here for a while
Till you teach me how to be alone
And i know that i will smile one day
When you finally find your way
And you know that ill always be in the stars
That never fade away
Dont leave this place
Untill you know where you need to go
So stay here for a while
Till you teach me how to be alone
Rain Shadow
no one likes me :cry: lol
Rain Shadow
I like you, but i like your song more! That was very good, i loved that line "Dont leave me till you teach me how to be alone" is how i think it went. It made me think dam i wish i wrote that line. All the lines fit well, and it was very well put together.
Keep writing, :D
I really like your lyrics. I agree with GuerilaCharlie with the line "Dont leave me till you teach me how to be alone." It was very good. Keep writing.........
Best of luck!!
Aeryn K. McAvan
You cannot live a perfect day without doing something for someone who will never be able to repay you.
Life is not about what I've done, what I should've done, what I could've done. Its about what I can do and what I will do.
Thanks!!! really appreciated!!! thanks for the response :D
Rain Shadow
