What's the Blues?

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djdubb

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Topic starter 05/07/2005 4:32 am

What's the Blues?
Chasing something you can never have.
What's the Blues?
Rocks blocking your only path.

solo 1

What's the Blues?
Being kicked down all over again.
What's the Blues?
My woman been seeing to many men.

solo 2

What's the Blues?
Sorrow all in your soul.
What's the Blues?
Wanting to die before your old.

"Failure is the key to success" Lee Wen; Champ vs Champ

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Jonsi

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05/07/2005 7:06 am

Simple, effective - not bad at all! I liked it.

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sfdean

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22/07/2005 5:59 pm

Nicely done. The weakest line is "rocks blocking your only path" because that's a minor discomfort by blues standards. You might consider changing it.

SfDean.

Jazz isn't dead. It just smells funny--Frank Zappa.
Who smells funny now?--Jazz

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