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(@tre-billie-mike)
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Hi, this is my first post on this site, anyway here is my song i have written, i think it sounds good but i want to see what other people think.

The title of the Song is: Why!

Verse 1
Why was I cursed with this life
Why is it always me
Why do I always have to suffer
Why can't anyone see…..

Chorus
Every day I used to think tomorrow will be better
But I was wrong I have given up
I am now thinking of things I never wanted to
Why Why Why

Verse 2
For a moment I thought my life was getting better
But then I realised the truth
My life has changed
From bad to worse there is nothing left

Chorus
Every day I used to think tomorrow will be better
But I was wrong I have given up
I am now thinking of things I never wanted to
Why Why Why

Verse 3
Why was it meant to be
Is this the end for me
Maybe I should let it be
I can no longer find the key

Chorus
Every day I used to think tomorrow will be better
But I was wrong I have given up
I am now thinking of things I never wanted to
Why Why Why

Verse 4
Why do I no longer care
I am in so much despair
Life is never fair
Should I send out the flare

Chorus 2
Why do I feel that nothing can cure me
Why do I think that all my dreams are over
Why should I run for cover
WHY… WHY… WHY… WHY ME!!!

I hope u all like it, :) Please tell me what you think and how i could improve it, thanks

...It's Somthing unpredictable, But in the end is right, I hope you have the time of your life...

----I Am The American Idiot---- <-------You have been warned


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(@diluted_metal)
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Hey, like the song, i used to write songs pretty similair, im not the best song writer here but the song has some pretty good lines, it would be cool to hear Howard Jones from KillSwitch Engage sing that song. Anyway, pretty cool!

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(@tre-billie-mike)
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i have a few more songs like this but i can't find the lyrics at the moment but when i do i'll post them on here :D

...It's Somthing unpredictable, But in the end is right, I hope you have the time of your life...

----I Am The American Idiot---- <-------You have been warned


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(@chuk50)
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Lol! That song is quite good. Not near as good as the ones that I wrote for ya! Lol bro, you're not as good as me :D

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(@tre-billie-mike)
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Lol bro, you're not as good as me :D

that's wot u think bro but in reality i write the better songs u just havnt seen them yet hehe 8)

...It's Somthing unpredictable, But in the end is right, I hope you have the time of your life...

----I Am The American Idiot---- <-------You have been warned


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Lol bro, you're not as good as me :D

u just havnt seen them yet hehe 8)

Well, DUH, I've just seen one. Lol 8)

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(@tre-billie-mike)
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lol well i am not going to reveal them till i've found the right chord shapes etc. for them so ha you may never know what songs i have been writing 8)

...It's Somthing unpredictable, But in the end is right, I hope you have the time of your life...

----I Am The American Idiot---- <-------You have been warned


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(@chuk50)
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lol well i am not going to reveal them till i've found the right chord shapes etc. for them so ha you may never know what songs i have been writing 8)
Any excuse to make you look good. I may never know what songs you've been writing 'cause you're too ashamed of them. :P

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(@tre-billie-mike)
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whatever, and just for your information im not ashamed i love the lyrics i write and i dont care what anyone else thinks so you can go and eat a hippo 8)

...It's Somthing unpredictable, But in the end is right, I hope you have the time of your life...

----I Am The American Idiot---- <-------You have been warned


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(@chuk50)
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so you can go and eat a hippo 8)
Yumm.... Hippo :)

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