"YOUR NAME"....( ANOTHER S S G SONG )

I GUESS NO-ONE LIKES THIS OR HATES IT ????? STRANGE THAT ???????

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well.....

Here's my 2 cents.

It's interesting to find the numbers on the wall and wonder what they are really like and if they're real. It would have been nice to read about you taking a chance and calling one and seeing. Maybe you find true love...or a guy named Bubba. It would have been nice see take it out of the stall a little.

Also...the line

This is truely a great day
I think there is even a gay

I really struggle with that one. Didn't dig it. Just my opinion.

I think you have a cool topic...but go ahead and call one for us...and suprise us with who answers :o

The line you mentioned I changed because it was offensive and not p c
my original line was :

There are other numbers here
There is even a qu.eer
Your number caught my eye
There is a phone close by
Your number caught my eye
Then I let out a small sigh

but I was informed that it may be offensive so I changed it

Yes I still strugle with the new line as well but when my boy and I play it we sing the original verse

cheers

woah, I feel torn apart inside when I read through it.
I don't know yet what it is but it's there.
GREAT!

I would somehow change:
"I might just might"

I know it's somehow interesting to read but as the secont line it just sounds out of place and as if you didn't know what to write and so you just repeated yourself... Maybe you could repeat this phrase near the end with another ending, then it would come across more on purpose and give it a little extra touch... (repeat a repetition and it's not a bad thing anymore - LOL...)
...but that's just my opinion, so that doesn't mean anything...
:)

Hi'ya m07zm4n,

You know your the first person to pick up on that ( repeated word )

"I MIGHT JUST MIGHT "

when I sing it I do it this way

" I MIGHT (pause with guitar srumming from EM TO G strumming each chord 4 times ) JUST MIGHT "

hope that helps

I just wanted to be different

cheers

Ah! Thanks for clarification!
I think that works for me :)
With this methode I think it emphazises this line instead of sounding just repetitiv...

wanna let you know that I have read your lyric, but will be better if I post tomorow.

Hmmmmmmmmmmmm

One is one too many :lol: :lol:

lucy