Hello. I've been working on a song and I have a chord progression and lyrics for what there is, but I feel like it needs something. I was wondering, I were to post the progression as it stands, perhapse someone could suggest changes for streamlining or adding to it. That would be cool. Here it is:
4/4 Time
Intro
C / / / / / / / F#dim / / / / / / / Bb / / / / / / / A / / / / / / / (x2)
Part 1
G# / / / / / / / F# / / / / / / / G# / / / / / / / / D# / / / / / / / /
F# / / / / / / / G# / / / / / / / C# / / / / / / / A / / / / / / /
Part 2
C / / / Bb / / / F / / / / / / /
Bb / / / G#/ / / D# / / / / / / /
Part 3
C / / / / / / / F#dim / / / / / / / Bb / / / / / / / A / / / / / / / (x4)
And then I repeat it again with different lyrics but the same basic melody line. Ideally I was the song to be a dancy number but it seems like the progression just might not be suited to getting people to shake what their momma gave em. Basically, I just want to make it interesting. I'd also like to know if anyone spots any basic flawed or inspired elements to its design. Thank you.
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