hi all..i seem to be writing a hell of a lot lately,and seen as im with a girl now i guessed id write her a song..i havent given it to her yet id like some feedback on cheesyness and stuff...
heres the link...
thanks for listening ive been having some great feedback off people...
gaz :D
"people laugh at me because im different...i pity you..because your all the same"
It's pretty good, not my tastes, but good. For some reason, it made me think of Lifehouse. Can't say if it's cheesy or not though, I'm not a real big fan this type of music, or songs on this subject.
Hey Gaz-uk, nice tune :D I don't see how you could go wrong with that song as a gift to a young lady. Don't sound a bit cheesy to me :D The only thing i would say is the guitar was slightly out of tune, but not to badly. If you used a capo you might want to re tune with a chromatic tuner again after you apply the capo, I have the same problem with my acoustic. BTW the guy at d.music was a first class jerk :twisted: ---the dog
BTW It was well played :D
Does sound pretty good. Not corney and played well. Time to give it to her. :D
By the way, your link is wrong but with a little knowledge of DMusic I found it. Here is the correct link. http://GAZ-UK.dmusic.com/
:D cheers dog for the kind words...i need new strings for it to be honest with you,ahh yeah the dude on d.music can ....well....go away..lol
basically im just hanging on until i buy an electro acoustic at xmas...go me!!
hey nils..thanks a lot man,ive actually given it to her already...shes the kind of girl that doesnt show her feelings very well....but i could tell she appreciated it :D :D :D
thanks again guys :D
gaz
"people laugh at me because im different...i pity you..because your all the same"
great, gotta' say you've got serious skills!!
Huh? That link leads me to the home page of dmusic
Huh? That link leads me to the home page of dmusic
http://gaz-uk.dmusic.com/
:D
Thanks. Sounds fine. Tune that guitar though. Song structure is good. You're a little flat in parts.
