I like to redo this song every now and then to see how I've progressed. It was the first song I could play from beginning to end. Could have taken a step back though. I can play up to speed more or less but my arm feels like it's going to fall off. Anyway, feedback is appreciated.
Finally got to hear this , I actually only had a loose connection on my speakers ..
A little fast probably like mentioned , but over all not a bad effort ...
I really do think with each song you are now posting there is a improvement ..
Keep posting would be my advise and maybe have a little patience , when we spoke I was just out of bed and Endland are something like 11 hours behind me , mind you I did have a big nite the nite before and did sleep in ..
1 question though not music related .....When do we get to see your wheels ?
Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am
Ok ...Its time to kick you out of the proverbial nest :twisted: Get your bad self with a bass player and a drummer....NOW :twisted: It is time :!: Just do it :wink: --ken
First of all, sounds like there's two instruments going - bass and a simple rhythm line - tempo's good, I presume the "bass" sound is drop C?
Then you hit the distorted riff - sounds really good to me.....timing's spot on - although I've got to admit I don't really know the original song that well....
Smokindog's on the money, you really need a band - YOUR band, playing your music! I said it before, I'll say it again - you've come a long way in a short time!
VERY cool!!!!
So women can't play rock, huh? Yeah, like Muhammad Ali couldn't box.....
Keep doing it YOUR way OWA.....
:D :D :D
Vic
"Sometimes the beauty of music can help us all find strength to deal with all the curves life can throw us." (D. Hodge.)
Yea...what he said :twisted:
(Typing without reading the comments above so I don't get influenced)
I think the rhythm and playing is pretty good. Starting at the 36th second you seem to be switching to some sort of overdrive or effect. It sounds like either the recording equipment can't handle the signal level or it's too loud to the point that tone is being affected adversely. I don't know how to explain this any better and maybe I'm not even right about it. But it's my 2 cents. I think the recording might also benefit from the addition of a drum track or something similar since it's not chordal acoustic stuff it tends to get repetitive easier.
Anyway. Like I said, good playing. And lots of improvement from before. Keep it up!
oktay
8) Rock on OWA! +2 what dog & vic said. :D
Dan
"The only way I know that guarantees no mistakes is not to play and that's simply not an option". David Hodge
