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(@muchavo)
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hey guys

i made this a few weeks ago

gonna have to bear with my poor vocal performance

its something im trying to improve

but i kinda through a joke in at the end to make light of it

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8097202

It must be getting early, clocks are running late....

Paint by number morning sky looks so phony....

Dawn is breaking everywhere light a candle, curse the glare....

Draw the curtains, I don't care 'cause it's all right....

 
Posted : 14/09/2009 4:46 pm
(@joehempel)
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Sounded pretty good to me! Kind of gotta dark feel to it....it reminds me of the game Silent Hill.

As far as your vocals go, and I'm no vocalist by a long shot...or greater, but it sounds like you are holding your breath when you are singing.

In Space, no one can hear me sing!

 
Posted : 14/09/2009 5:39 pm
(@muchavo)
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defiantly a dark subject and a dark song

thanks for the tip about the singing

im glad you enjoyed

It must be getting early, clocks are running late....

Paint by number morning sky looks so phony....

Dawn is breaking everywhere light a candle, curse the glare....

Draw the curtains, I don't care 'cause it's all right....

 
Posted : 14/09/2009 5:48 pm
 Taso
(@taso)
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muchavo,

first of all, good to see you're still around. secondly, that song is pretty ****ing awesome.

i'll try to write more, i'm listening a few times. really like it, though. There's stuff that could be improved, but probably easy fixes, and overall it's really a great song.

http://taso.dmusic.com/music/

 
Posted : 14/09/2009 10:40 pm
(@muchavo)
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thanks

its been a long time since ive posted here

im glad to see youre still around too

how have you been?

It must be getting early, clocks are running late....

Paint by number morning sky looks so phony....

Dawn is breaking everywhere light a candle, curse the glare....

Draw the curtains, I don't care 'cause it's all right....

 
Posted : 15/09/2009 12:25 am