This is an excercise I been doing that I turned into a little tune. Its all fingerpicked, wondering what ya think
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=510935&songID=3850330
It's a nice idea. Lot's of potential. I think you just need to take it by the reigns a bit more and lead it and the listener "through the path and into the garden". I kind of feel like your leading me in circles around the garden but I'd like to dip my feet into the pool. Keep working on it. It could be a real story without words. For me songs take tiime to evolve, so, I like to keep ideas like this and let them grow. Don't stop at "good enough" when it could be awesome.
I hear ya, just waiting to become more diverse at guitar. This is more of a thing someone's in the mood for short of a performance. This will though probably end up part of something else since its something my muscle memory has remembered...thanks for listening