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Heaven and Stars -dark- demo

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(@raevin)
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Alright...so, it's been a LONG time since I've posted here on GN, and thought my first welcome-back post would be a song I've been working on.

You can either listen to it at http://www.myspace.com/faithplus10 or here: http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/raevin/music/all/play584438

Mind you, it's a demo. I know some parts could use a touch up (transition from chorus to bridge, for one).

All in all though, it's only missing vocals and bass (both of which I am not responsible for, hah).

I'd post the lyrics, but they're going to be getting a major re-write.

Edit
Sorry if I broke a rule here (not sure if there's some sort of critique-for-critique rule here or something). Also, I know the song sounds depressing (according to some friends of mine), but...that's the feeling I was going for. One last thing...I just played the guitar; drums were done with a VST plugin I have.

 
Posted : 04/04/2009 6:35 pm
(@chasembrown)
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I really like the transition at 1:14...drums could be more varied, but I know programming drums is tedious.

http://www.myspace.com/chasembrown
http://www.myspace.com/senselessbeats

 
Posted : 08/04/2009 2:45 am