The most annoying song who will listen to
I have done so far and there is no FX , its me raw
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=490569&songID=5684147
I am who I am
Just a ordinary man
I am who I am
I don't want to be a star
I just want to play my guitar
I am who I am
I know I am not a zero
I know I 'll never be a hero
Most of all
I know who I am
I am who I am
I am who I am
I know who I am
Please feel free to leave a comment good or bad
Trev..
Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am
Hey Trev,
I like the simplicity of this and your vocals remind me a bit
of Leonard Cohen. That phrasing seems a little off at times
But I think that may be an easy fix.
It's mostly the second and third verses that seem off.
I don't want to be a star
I just want to play my guitar
I am who I am
I know I am not a zero
I know I 'll never be a hero
Most of all
I know who I am
I am who I am
I am who I am
I know who I am
Just a matter of removing a word or two and moving a line
like this
I don't want to be a star
I just want to play guitar
I am who I am
I am not a zero
I 'll never be a hero
I am who I am
And most of all
I know who I am
I am who I am
I am who I am
I know who I am
Oh and on the second verse; Didn't I say something similar in
my song Trudy(Don't You Understand)?
John
I can not lie to you John yes you did ,
I have always loved that song and I play it in my car all the time on the CD I made from SSG writters .
So I really should have given you credit for that , and I am sorry I forgot to mention that :(
Trudy(Don't You Understand ) was probably my inspiration for this unknowingly and not deliberate ..
Greatest form of flattery ??? I am truely sorry John I honestly did not even think of that , I was playing around and "I am who I am " came out and then I just started recording ..
This was done 1 take as the words came in my head , probably why it isn't lyrically brilliant , or muscially fabulous ..
Trevor
Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am
I can not lie to you John yes you did ,
I have always loved that song and I play it in my car all the time on the CD I made from SSG writters .
So I really should have given you credit for that , and I am sorry I forgot to mention that :(
Trudy(Don't You Understand ) was probably my inspiration for this unknowingly and not deliberate ..
Greatest form of flattery ??? I am truely sorry John I honestly did not even think of that , I was playing around and "I am who I am " came out and then I just started recording ..
No Problem it just goes to show I got the emotion right.
Thanks
John
Your guitar is out of tune :(
"And above all, respond to all questions regarding a given song's tonal orientation in the following manner: Hell, it don't matter just kick it off!"
-Chris Thile
I can not lie to you John yes you did ,
I have always loved that song and I play it in my car all the time on the CD I made from SSG writters .
So I really should have given you credit for that , and I am sorry I forgot to mention that :(
Trudy(Don't You Understand ) was probably my inspiration for this unknowingly and not deliberate ..
Greatest form of flattery ??? I am truely sorry John I honestly did not even think of that , I was playing around and "I am who I am " came out and then I just started recording ..
No Problem it just goes to show I got the emotion right.
Thanks
John
You got alot right in that song John
More than I think you realise
Trevor
Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am
wow man . what a difference. I like your voice here.
pure, clear, effective. you actually have a good voice for singing.
you stayed more on pitch this go.
of course, your guitar had trouble.
it is out of tune.
I like this.
very 8)
Your guitar is out of tune :(
I can remeber anyone ever telling Dylon that
LMAO :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
I know and it was deliberate but good on ya Dneck for listening and picking that up , I was trying to do my best Dylan but well I can't do him he is unique ..
Trev..
Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am
I heard some Dylan in your singing. it was not there before.
you are relaxing more and using better technique.
when I do that some Dylan comes out.
keep it up.
Hi Trevor! :D
I didn't visit this forum for several days! Just I couple of lines for telling you I agree with the others, mainly Dogbite, you have a great voice here!
Well thanks guys
I really hate listening to my voice and what you have just heard is me no FX , just me and my old guitar ..
Thanks
Trevor
Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am
It was Jimmy Hendrix who after listening to Bob Dylan decided that if Dylan could sing and get away with it then he could. The rest is history as they say.
Nice one Trev but and its a big but there really is no excuse for recording a song with an out of tune guitar. Unless of course your famous LOL
Well you are on here I know.
Gerry
Those who can't dance always blame the band.