Here is a song I wrote
The lyrics may offend , but I there is one thing I have discovered in life , and that is I won't defend my song writing
I hope everyone can get past the lyrics and listen to the song for what it is ...A song
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7172235
Cheers
Trev...
Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am
Im certainly not easily offended. Nice hypnotic rhythm. :D
"I like to play that guitar. I have to stare at it while I'm playing it because I'm not very good at playing it."
Noel Gallagher (who took the words right out of my mouth)
Good job, Trevor
Nice settings on your guitar. I like the sound.
Thanks for sharing and keep 'em coming.
KR2
It's the rock that gives the stream its music . . . and the stream that gives the rock its roll.
thanks for the feed back guys
really appreciate it
Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am
I am not offended either. wow, you are getting so much better.
fluid guitar and emotive voice. the recording has improved too.
excellent. gee, I kinda feel proud of you.
Agree with the Dog, you've really come a long way.
say hey to Skinny & the gang
#4491....
I like it. Love the guitar sound. Not offended, cause I agree with you, well except the love thing.
Thanks guys
Dog , I have really appreciated all your feed back and if you feel proud then I am rather pleased some one feels that way .Cheers
Twisted , thanks mate and I will do Skinny is away till 2 nd January , but will catch him later
Jw --Thanks for the feed back ...
Really appreciate you time guys
Merry christmas
Trev
Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am
Being offended is for wimps. :P I'm in Canada atm, listening though my laptop speakers so I cant comment on the production. As far as the song itself goes: I like it. You're slowly starting to use your voice, the phrasing makes sense and most of all the song sounds sincere. I'll listen to it again when I get home but it'll be a while. Merry Christmas and thanks for sharing!
Thanks Ignar
Always a pleasure to read your thoughts on my "work " ...
Have a great Christmas and a safe one
Trev..
Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am
When I first read the lyrics on the Songwriting thread, I liked the lryrical quality. They were good. I was not thrilled about the content (not offended, its your song, its what you want to say about yourself, and the lyrics convey that very well).
As a song, you have done it very well and I do enjoy listening it.
Thank you Huricane
This is the greatest compliment one can ever receive
As a song, you have done it very well and I do enjoy listening it.
Appreciate your feed back , and just for the record it isn't my beliefs or anything like that its' purely a song .Not all songs are happy and joyous ..
I was a little depressed and had some bad news before writing this and at that particular time these words seemed to be right ..
Thanks again
Trev..
Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am
