It Hurts Me Too - Take 2- Please comment - Better? (updated)

I've only listened to the 'take 5' but as I understand it each of the members of your band have to sing one verse? If you are not satisfied with your singing, you might try just speaking the verse, just communicating the idea and feelings. I think there is some real potential in that idea. You shouldn't have to follow the timing or beat of the music which can just be the background for the spoken verse. I think that could be very expressive and very effective. I might try that myself.

Good luck

Yea, I'm with Bish on this one :D Overall I really like it. The guitar is nice too 8) Cool tune!!