As i posted in the sondwriters section, this is my first song, go easy
It's like heaven
Verse 1
I'm staring now, into your eyes//
Trying to find my way//
So please dont blink or you'll disguise//
What I'm working for each day//
Verse 2
There's so many things in this lifetime//
That i wont get to see//
But as long as i know that you're mine//
My soul will be set free//
Chorus
Cos' it's like heaven//
When i look in your eyes//
And it's like heaven//
When i realise, there's still time//
Verse 3
The fire in my heart is burning bright//
And it's all because of you//
And with the stars above it feels so right//
I'm declaring my love it true//
Verse 4
With the ups and downs that we have faced//
I smile at the thought//
That the patterns we take, can be traced//
By the lessons that we're taught//
Chorus
Cos' it's like heaven//
When i look in your eyes//
And it's like heaven//
When i realise, there's still time//
There's still time.
Here's the link to my first audio, i know about the recording lol noit the best and dont mind the singing, i try.
http://www.megafileupload.com/en/file/2 ... n-mp3.html
Thanks guys and gals
link does not work for me.
Me neither.
It's the rock that gives the stream its music . . . and the stream that gives the rock its roll.
damn it, ill try again.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=514800
now the top song on the soundclick page
It's a decent song. The recording needs some work. There are some minor timing issues. You're a little sharp/flat here and there. The song does shine through quite well though.
