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(@ignar-hillstrom)
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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=361288&songID=6161423
The jezus Jelly ascends at dawn
rearranges the stage
and revolts before it's victim.

Where lonely clowns eat soup for free
a divorce toys with his last thumb
and the stench dictates their faces

Jelly Jezus Jelly Jezus
Please pick up the phone
My soul is sold the story told
And I'm all alone at home

Jelly Jezus Jelly Jezus
Please pick up the phone
My soul is sold the story told
And I'm all alone at home

 
Posted : 12/01/2008 11:32 am
(@dogbite)
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you have something here. kind of like a nightmare you don't want to end.
the verse is excellent.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=644552
http://www.soundclick.com/couleerockinvaders

 
Posted : 12/01/2008 11:58 am
(@ignar-hillstrom)
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Thanks. :) I'm really focussing on writing lyrics lately, instead of improvising them. It's pretty draining to do but I feel it makes it all reflect much more what I want it to be, even though I've heared many people really hate the lyrics.

 
Posted : 13/01/2008 7:13 pm
 Mike
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How ya been, Arjen?

I don't know what to say.

It's cool, weird, intriguing and mind absorbing.

The lyrics are weird too. They make more sense when listening to it though.

Two thumbs up, but I don't think I would listen to it that many times. Not musical enough I guess. I think I would have liked to have heard some instruments. Something to give it more character.

Mike

 
Posted : 13/01/2008 9:32 pm
(@ignar-hillstrom)
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Hey there, good to see you! 8)

You're right in that it isn't very musical, or atleast 'musical' musical. This track will function as an 'intro track', it's more to set the mood then to be a track on it';s own. That's why I let the end run out for so long, gives me more room to see how to connect different things.

 
Posted : 14/01/2008 2:30 pm
(@smokindog)
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Yeah, very moody to say the least :D The lyric is awesome :twisted: I can't wait to hear the piece that this the intro for :D

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http://www.youtube.com/user/smokindog
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Posted : 16/01/2008 5:18 am