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(@elpantalla)
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Hey guys, been on a bit of a writing kick lately, music just seems to be flowing. The other day I was noodling around in a funky tuning, kind of an alternate version of open A. I ended up writing a little fingerpicking riff, and I got a decent melody going, so I wrote some lyrics. I tried to keep it real simple and sparse. I also used a different vocal method. I kind of muffled the microphone with my hands and sang real soft real close to it. I think it turned out decent. Tell me what you think.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=746552&songID=7063712

One chord is fine.
Two you're pushing it.
Three and you're into jazz.

 
Posted : 15/11/2008 6:45 pm
(@dogbite)
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ya, pretty cool number. you really have been on a kick. nice when the juices flow.
there are only a few minor recording things that could be worked on. otherwise, you have a really good song.
you have a good voice and you use it well.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=644552
http://www.soundclick.com/couleerockinvaders

 
Posted : 16/11/2008 2:44 pm
(@guitar_guy)
Posts: 32
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a soothing piece.

http://www.jammingbudz.com/jamming-space/GuitarGuy

 
Posted : 16/11/2008 7:00 pm