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(@ello2003)
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Please check out this song and critique it please, positives and negatives both are helpful thanks

Also link me to anything you would like me to C4C

Cheers

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8411407

 
Posted : 06/12/2009 4:24 pm
(@dogbite)
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I thought I was going to hear a Neil Young cover.
critique:
good guitar. good voice.
the guitar tracks need fine tuning. timing mainly.
the vocals are too far back in the mix. bring the vocal forward.
the whole thing felt stilted. needs more fluidity. so just relax.
probably like everyone, when the mic is on and the tape rolling, tension sets in.
it's because of the focusing on getting a good performance. usually.
didn't follow the lyrics because of the mix.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=644552
http://www.soundclick.com/couleerockinvaders

 
Posted : 06/12/2009 4:42 pm
(@ello2003)
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Thanks a lot for your Critique.
Currently working on timing - Very Weak at it, looking into using a metronome.
Not sure how i will bring my vocals forward but i'm looking to get a condenser mic for xmas and positioning of that should be key.

Cheers though youve given me a lot to consider

 
Posted : 06/12/2009 4:56 pm
(@dan-t)
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I just wanted to add that there is a lot of white noise on the track as well. You may want to try eliminating that to get a more professional sound. Keep it up. 8)

"The only way I know that guarantees no mistakes is not to play and that's simply not an option". David Hodge

 
Posted : 20/12/2009 7:30 pm