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(@buk-skywoker)
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Wsup Ladies and Gents
Trying to get better at giiiiiiiiiitar
I did this 91408
I did another one 83008
Let me know if i improved
You know all criticism welcome

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Thanx for taking the time to check it out

 
Posted : 14/09/2008 5:24 pm
(@peaveywolfang5150)
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here is my input, remember its only my input! i really liked the lead guitar playing it was smooth and kind of relaxing to listen to. i did like the jazzy blueness to the lead playing. there is one thing i would try to do. i really don't play blues and jazz i am a HEAVY METAL guy, but the bass line was getting really boring i would at least try to changing the melody in the background at least once or twice. i get really tired of hearing the some riffs for 3 mins straight. so i think if you add some new bass riff and what not you would have a better song.

 
Posted : 14/09/2008 7:43 pm
(@buk-skywoker)
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I appreciate the comment
I still learning
I dig heavy metal and like the stuff marty, dimebag, kerry do
I haven't had time to really sit down and learn it
But I will after while.

thanx again for the comment

 
Posted : 14/09/2008 8:12 pm