Hi
While going through some files on
my PC I found this song I had forgotten
about. Thought I would post it and see
what you all think .
When Tomorrow's Only Yesterday
John
Sounds like a good progression (if that's the proper word) but I think it was let down by the recording. Also I'm afraid to say it got a little repetitive toward the end although it's a really nice progression it's nice to have a contrast. You could either cut it down or add a different bit.
Nice one, I really like the lyrics :D Would be good with the full band treatment I think :D RM might have an idea, maybe add a bridge somewhere in the last half of the song :?: Just my 2 cents.---the dog
Thanks for the input.
You are both right some sort of bridge after the
second verse/chorus would work well.
Dog,
When I wrote this I was listen to some jam band stuff
so a full band treatment was what I had in mind.
I think I'll have to revisit this one and see what I
can come up with.
John
