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Celt
 Celt
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Hi
While going through some files on
my PC I found this song I had forgotten
about. Thought I would post it and see
what you all think .

When Tomorrow's Only Yesterday

John

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Posted : 28/12/2005 2:38 pm
reasonableman
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Sounds like a good progression (if that's the proper word) but I think it was let down by the recording. Also I'm afraid to say it got a little repetitive toward the end although it's a really nice progression it's nice to have a contrast. You could either cut it down or add a different bit.

 
Posted : 03/01/2006 5:26 pm
smokindog
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Nice one, I really like the lyrics :D Would be good with the full band treatment I think :D RM might have an idea, maybe add a bridge somewhere in the last half of the song :?: Just my 2 cents.---the dog

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Posted : 04/01/2006 2:10 am
Celt
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Thanks for the input.

You are both right some sort of bridge after the
second verse/chorus would work well.

Dog,

When I wrote this I was listen to some jam band stuff
so a full band treatment was what I had in mind.

I think I'll have to revisit this one and see what I
can come up with.

John

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Posted : 05/01/2006 8:47 am