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My Demo - Walking On Moonlit Shadows

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(@innerdream)
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Hello all

I would be grateful if you would take a listen to my new song that I have uploaded – Walking On Moonlit Shadows – at my soundclick page at the link below

http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3U.m3u?ID=2475272&q=Hi

Your comments and views are most welcome on all areas (guitars, vocals, lyrics, melody / harmonies, dynamics etc)

Cheers

Lyrics

Today I walk through the streets from this place to the shore
The moonlit sky brings the rain for now and evermore
I've seen their faces before from many years ago
I feel their sad, cold embrace – why do they feel this way?

I've been waiting for the sunrise
I've been waiting all my life

Every dream I had made me feel so sad
As I walk on moonlit shadows

As I sit here deep in thought, how can they bring the change?
They have to walk through the door or life will stay the same
The inner will still remains in everyone I see
Today they can make the change and live life their own way

I've been waiting for the sunrise
I've been waiting all my life

Every dream I had made me feel so sad
As I walk on moonlit shadows

© PFM 29/05/05

For other InnerDream songs, news, updates etc click on the link below

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/innerdreammusic.htm

 
Posted : 29/05/2005 4:38 pm
(@shadewalker)
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Surprisingly cool. You've got some good clean guitar tones going there. The blend between clean and distorted tones is also pretty good. I think the voice sounds pretty flat, though, which could be a microphone problem. I think you could easily improve that part by practicing singing some more, I definitely see some potential there. There are also some timing issues here and there that can also be eliminated through practicing.

Keep it up!

 
Posted : 29/05/2005 6:25 pm
(@innerdream)
Posts: 38
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Surprisingly cool. You've got some good clean guitar tones going there. The blend between clean and distorted tones is also pretty good. I think the voice sounds pretty flat, though, which could be a microphone problem. I think you could easily improve that part by practicing singing some more, I definitely see some potential there. There are also some timing issues here and there that can also be eliminated through practicing.

Keep it up!

Thanks for the kind words :) Glad that you liked the song :)

 
Posted : 29/05/2005 6:29 pm
 Taso
(@taso)
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Cool stuff. Nice guitar playing, nice tone... Liked it in general. I think the voice track needs to be turned up a notch though. Other than that its really good. Definitly nice blend with the overdrive and the clean like shadewalker said. Very well done.

http://taso.dmusic.com/music/

 
Posted : 29/05/2005 7:30 pm
(@innerdream)
Posts: 38
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Cool stuff. Nice guitar playing, nice tone... Liked it in general. I think the voice track needs to be turned up a notch though. Other than that its really good. Definitly nice blend with the overdrive and the clean like shadewalker said. Very well done.

Thanks for the comments :) They are much appreciated :)

 
Posted : 29/05/2005 10:02 pm