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(@dogbite)
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here is another old song. it is one of my top ten favorites.
I put a SM57 in front of a 1958 Gibsonette amp (10" Jensen speaker) then used my trusty strat plus.
I am singing so cover your ears. :oops:

mystery train (Scotty Moore style)

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_music.cfm?bandID=644552

this sort of is a work in progress. I not positive about the mastering, the mix, and even some of the tracks.
I know I can do better; a mistake free track is impossible. grrr. I like the vintage quality I am hearing.
feedback is most welcome.

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Posted : 14/03/2010 5:16 pm
(@boxboy)
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That's a top 10 song for me as well, db. One of my all time faves. 8)
Great groove you've got going; I love the tone of the guitar in the little solo. It's almost human, like you're scatting.
One suggestion re. the mix: I like the drums for that kind of song drier, more staccato, almost a martial feel. Makes all the other funky stuff stand out even more.
That said, I really liked it. :)

Don

 
Posted : 14/03/2010 5:49 pm
(@ricochet)
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I like that!

"Scotty Moore Style" is a high standard, but you can pull it off!

In the little "train whistle" fill, there's something that needs tweaking about the tone, but I can't put my finger on it and say how to do it. It's somehow just a little abrasive to my ear, coming out of a Mac laptop speaker.

Great playing! :D

"A cheerful heart is good medicine."

 
Posted : 14/03/2010 5:51 pm
(@dogbite)
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the lick has two things that bug me: the first set of double stops is bent a tad high and I took the reverb off. hence the abrasive tone.
dry/staccato on the drums? not sure what you mean.

thanks for the replies.

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Posted : 14/03/2010 6:20 pm
(@almann1979)
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thats a catchy tune there dogbite, and a top class recording!!!

"I like to play that guitar. I have to stare at it while I'm playing it because I'm not very good at playing it."
Noel Gallagher (who took the words right out of my mouth)

 
Posted : 14/03/2010 6:47 pm
(@trguitar)
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Nice Job! Great tone, course I'm listening through a pair of $120 powered Audiotechnica computer speakers. :?

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grow big, wear glasses if you need 'em."
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Posted : 14/03/2010 7:00 pm
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Like the song, and dig the earthy "live" feel you've got going there. 8)

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Posted : 14/03/2010 7:28 pm
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Sounds like you did that at Sun Records back in the 50's 8) Thats a great sound. lead guitar and vocals need to come up a bit in the mix. Using the SM57 was a good choice, not using a mic on a 58 Gibson amp is probably against the law in several states :lol: BTW was that reverb from the amp? back in 74 I got to use a old gibson amp for about 6 months, it had a awesome reverb :note2:

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Posted : 15/03/2010 5:21 pm
(@dogbite)
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hey dog thanks for the comments. I decided to redo the vocals...I notice now and late that I am just a bit late. I also am going to redo the solo. those double stops are off and shrill. I will then bring them up in the mix.
yeah, Sun Records. I have the three disc set and they inspired me. I did not do the original Blue Flames version. I always liked Scotty Moore's version.
I ran the guitar into my delay before the amp. I used a single repeat (echo). it worked great for the electric ry part. I also had the same setup for the solo, but the echo wrecked things. I put some vintage single plate reverb on it, but in the end took that off. hence the shrillness. the reverb mellowed it out.
so now I will just redo the solo and clean it up. I did sveral thopusand takes on that lick I made up. it's burned in my head and fingers. I would like to improve it but I am 'trained' now and will not be alble to thi nk on the fly when the red button is pushed.
these old amp are truly cool. mine breaks up very early. a local harp player saw it on a gigonce and offered me $$$. I said no. he wanted to know where I lived. I gave him a fake address. people kill these for these. really???

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Posted : 15/03/2010 5:47 pm
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Very cool dogbite, I actually love your solo as it is.

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Posted : 15/03/2010 9:36 pm
(@dogbite)
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thanks jase. I hope you like the new one I just posted.

hey all. after listening to my original song post I went back into the studio. I came upon the first take on Mystery Train that I did a few weeks ago. I made it quickly to get the idea down . well, quickly was a whole weekend. there were a few mistakes on it and I ended up trying to re record from scratch. one effort was better technically, but sounded un energetic. the next try was better. that's what I posted when I began this thread.
I re posted Mystery Train. I used the very first recording. the throw away one. it sounds the best, rough as it is.
for me, it has the right feel, sound, mix and energy. I can't believe it.

dang. recording is hard.

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Posted : 15/03/2010 11:36 pm
(@ricochet)
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I really like Version 2.0!

"A cheerful heart is good medicine."

 
Posted : 15/03/2010 11:50 pm
(@dogbite)
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I really like Version 2.0!

wow you are fast I just left my soundclick page to update that song.
and I am checking back in here to test the link.

you likey? cool. thanks. :)

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Posted : 15/03/2010 11:59 pm
 jcp
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Classic! very good, your gtr sounds amazing. :note1:

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Posted : 27/03/2010 8:26 pm