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(@erikevans1994)
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hi, i'm new to the site, was just wondering if anyone who has a second could check out my bands new song, and let me know what you think of it.
thanks
eric
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c-oqDG4Wpz4

this is another video of me playign my guitar, and feedback or suggestions welcome.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c2GnNNXT_JQ
:D


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(@alangreen)
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The band song - the instruments are out of time before the drums come in; and, perhaps I'm missing something, isn't a song supposed to have words?

The solo material - it has some nice ideas in places, but there are dissonances in others that just didn't work for me. It's also fairly monotonous, there's no variation in the rhythm or accompaniment.

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(@erikevans1994)
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Joined: 11 years ago
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hi
yeh if you read the description you would understand why it had no words, we just literally finished that song that day and we had a few singers in mind so we recorded it and sent it out to a couple of singers to get there opinions, it does now have words. as for the solo stuff, they were just ideas, thought what the hell may as well record them. : )
anyway thanks for taking the time to listen to them!
eric


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