New song, Come On

this is really good guys 8) and vocal is good for me, nice solos on sax and lead guitar ..very floydish ...smoke

thanks! :D

anyone else?

That's very cool! 8)

Can you post the lyrics, as well (with edits suitable for a family forum, of course)?

Margaret

Thanks!
I appreciate the feedback!
I have done some minor changes in the lyrics since I recorded it.
But they are pretty muh the same.
Some feedback on the lyrics to would be great!

The lyrics:

Come On

Give me booze give me all you got
Im gonna drown all my sorrows tonight
You say its a waste, but I dont care if it is
Nothing matters, I just dont give a s

I tried so hard and look where I`m now
Below bottom were hope dont show
Darker then black deeper than blue
* off pain, I will drown you
Yeah com on!

cool 8)

The piece works very well as a whole.

I like the guitar solo especially how it comes in

Good Job

John

Thanks alot for the answears!
keep it coming..
Feel free to tell me what you dont like to :lol:

Very cool, post some more of your work I'm very interested.

One criticism: it didn't really have a conclusion, it just stopped.

Thanks!
I agree.. I guess this is because we had no idea what the song was gonna sound like when we recorded it. We didnt really think of it as a song, just some weird laidback instrumental stuff. Everything but the guitar solo and vocals are recorded on first take without really knowing what to play (first bass, then guitar, and guitar). The lenght of the song were desided by the bass player when he desided that he was tired of playing the beat...
I am a bit afraid that recording it again in a more structured version would kill the mood of the song..

I also think that the part after the solo is to long. (even though we have recorded me drinking beer :D ). I kinda loose interest before the song is finished. But this depends very much on what mood Im in...
Even though I probably wont rerecord it.. How would you like it to be?
I was considering a solo between the two verses, and then an outro solo after the second verse when I recorded it.
Maybe I should add a third verse?
Please share your thoughts!

When it comes to posting more songs. I dont really have that much that is even closed to finished.
Probably have 30 unfinsihed songs on my computer though :?
But I do have one that Id like to get some opinions on. No vocals here though.
I`ll post it a new post, to keep things organized :wink:

That's really cool

I liked it a lot

Keep it up, I'd love to hear some other stuff from you guys!

Cool song, keep up the good work.

On a side note, I recommend you to change your username. In some languages it means something I'm sure you don't want to be associated with.

Thanks!!
Hehe.. I know what it means.

This is really cool. I like the changes to the lyrics too. "Darker than black, deeper than blue"

keep it coming.