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Well, this is my first whole song....Please be kind.

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sparky1ma
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What do you think? Please try to overlook the glaring mistakes and remember this is my first song. I'm a beginner so be nice, please. :)

http://s284.photobucket.com/albums/ll15/sparky1ma/?action=view&current=Richstarspbnr.flv

Where am I going....and why am I in this hand basket?

 
Posted : 19/01/2009 1:11 pm
kent_eh
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I kept waiting for you yo break into Purple Haze at the end. :D

Nicely done.
You're more ambitious than I was for my first recording... I did Louie Louie :lol:

I wrapped a newspaper ’round my head
So I looked like I was deep

 
Posted : 19/01/2009 3:02 pm
sparky1ma
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Thanks, man.

Where am I going....and why am I in this hand basket?

 
Posted : 19/01/2009 4:06 pm
dogbite
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thanks for the patriotic demo on this time in history. :)
love the white strat and maple neck. a killer combination in my book.
I wished you had held a lot of hose notes longer. there were some good overtones building, but you cut them off.
don't be in such a rush.
8)

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=644552
http://www.soundclick.com/couleerockinvaders

 
Posted : 19/01/2009 6:32 pm
sparky1ma
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thanks dogbite. I thought I was holding some of them to long. I'll do better next time. That was the first recording I'm working on doin' a little more with it. My problem is I try play it how it sounds in my head, but it doesn't seem to come out that way.

Where am I going....and why am I in this hand basket?

 
Posted : 19/01/2009 7:11 pm
dogbite
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My problem is I try play it how it sounds in my head, but it doesn't seem to come out that way.

LOL. amen to that . yeah, no matter how loud I turn it up in my head I can still hear what I play. not fair. :lol:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=644552
http://www.soundclick.com/couleerockinvaders

 
Posted : 19/01/2009 10:11 pm