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(@avikchaks)
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hiya

i plan to sing and strum " wonderful tonight " in a couple of days .....
so i'v put it up on soundclick.com so dat sum of the crowd here can advice me on wat aspect to improve ?

waiting in anticipation

http://www.soundclick.com/avikchaks

 
Posted : 13/09/2005 1:28 pm
 Taso
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Sounds great. You put your own style in it, you're in key, you're voice sounds great. The guitar sounds fine as well, the important thing in this song is your voice.

the ONLY suggestion I can make, is to work on your annunciation of the word "asks". You're saying it more like "ax". It probably has to do with your accent, and makes me wonder if you're a new yorker (cause that's how we say it ;) ).

Other than that, it sounded great. I loved the way you sang it.

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Posted : 13/09/2005 4:40 pm
 cnev
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I agree with Kramer, I really like the way you sung this. You have a good voice.

"It's all about stickin it to the man!"
It's a long way to the top if you want to rock n roll!

 
Posted : 13/09/2005 5:08 pm
(@avikchaks)
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thanx cnew and taso ,

for the compliments ...

yes .. " axe" is a problem :oops: i'll wrk on dat b4 i perform .. also i just listened to slow hand's version of it and realized i hav had it wrong for the last couple of days .. but i guess i'll leave it like this .. too much pain uploading ....

btw taso .. ur layla unplugged rocks man :P i t'll take me ages to play lead like dat

cheers !

 
Posted : 13/09/2005 5:58 pm
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Sounds good, can't add any thing that taso and cnev havent, so keep it up!--the dog

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Posted : 13/09/2005 8:26 pm
 Taso
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lol cnev....Makes me laugh every time.

avikchaks, the "axe" thing isn't THAT big of a deal. I hear Billy Joel do it in concert a lot, and he's a super star. I think the only problem with this is it doesn't really fit in with the song as it was performed by someone from England, where as Billy Joel, everyone knows is a native new yorker.

And thanks for the layla unplugged comment. I have no idea where you found it, but thanks :)

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Posted : 13/09/2005 8:40 pm
 Moai
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Sounds good to me! I thought you really sounded smooth. Better than me, anyway.

Oh, and you have a nice voice.

Bettie Page is the most beautiful woman who ever lived. You better recognize, G!

 
Posted : 13/09/2005 11:30 pm