ok, so here is a me singing (and playing guitar) a song I wrote. There are several off key notes, but tell me what you think, improvement, I am truely open to advice. The first one if a better quality but older version of the song, the second one is a new but very poorly recorded version. I ask that you would listen to and give advice on both. Thanks
First one
http://www.box.net/shared/riyrervx34
Second one
http://www.box.net/shared/5j4mvz818p
i couldnt get the second link to work :S it kept asking me to download it nomatter where i clicked
Hmm. It does seem to have that problem, well, you could try opening it with quicktime or something when it comes to the download option, if not, then you can just give advice on the first one.
I wasn't really able to hear your voice clearly in the second recording of the song, so I mainly listened to the first recording.
Sounds pretty good and unique (in a good way). As you mentioned there are several off notes, but they seem like they were just slight errors rather than notes that are out of your vocal range.
It would be good to hear the new version of the song with the vocals pushed quite a bit forward in the mix if possible.
Overall nice job.
so many places that are hard to see
so many places that aren't
so many places we want to be
so many times we are not
