Ok, hi everyone. It's been a looooong week with lots of annoyances (work, women, money etc.), so I haven't really worked on my writing much (or even playing for that matter), but anyway, I thought I better try and write something, so here goes my (last ditch) effort for this week;
After the Fall
Verse 1
A voice so distant
And yet so near
Has drawn me in
To face my fear
To let you go
Has split my mind
To a thousand shards
Of shattered times
Chorus
A bridge that's burning
Means your learning
A lesson the hard way round
A bridge that shone
But now is gone
Replaced by blackened cloud
Verse 2
A splintered psyche
It shows no signs
Of reforming
My broken mind
A love so lost
So beyond repair
I'm left clinging on
To loss and despair
Chorus
A bridge that's burning
Means your learning
A lesson the hard way round
A bridge that shone
But now is gone
Replaced by blackened cloud
Not bad I like the chorus it works well
The first two line sound kind of familiar maybe a
bit cliche but all and all it works well
John