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After the Fall - week 34 late entry!

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Ok, hi everyone. It's been a looooong week with lots of annoyances (work, women, money etc.), so I haven't really worked on my writing much (or even playing for that matter), but anyway, I thought I better try and write something, so here goes my (last ditch) effort for this week;

After the Fall

Verse 1

A voice so distant
And yet so near
Has drawn me in
To face my fear

To let you go
Has split my mind
To a thousand shards
Of shattered times

Chorus

A bridge that's burning
Means your learning
A lesson the hard way round

A bridge that shone
But now is gone
Replaced by blackened cloud

Verse 2

A splintered psyche
It shows no signs
Of reforming
My broken mind

A love so lost
So beyond repair
I'm left clinging on
To loss and despair

Chorus

A bridge that's burning
Means your learning
A lesson the hard way round

A bridge that shone
But now is gone
Replaced by blackened cloud


   
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Not bad I like the chorus it works well
The first two line sound kind of familiar maybe a
bit cliche but all and all it works well

John

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" It's easier than waiting around to die" Townes Van Zandt


   
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