Hey Guys....im new to this and well i dont know much about writing songs but im only 17 so i guess i might get better...well heres my song.
Clammed Down, No-where to go...
Choose a path...Not that path, choose my path
Why wont you see.....
Thats not me......ohh
Wheres all the sentiment....?
Where have you gone
The time has come..
Clock will not...stop....ticking..
Contemplate, whats it all worth....?
Bagage hunched over myy shoulder...
I Wave to my friends..
hardly a raised head can be seen
A cold wave.....just hit me
I'll be walking...alone tonigght
Sitting alone...on this helpless night
Looking out the window....
At endless fields of...nothing..to....the horizon.
I will paint my life
Threads over threads
Mistakes over mistakes
Hope....can be a damming word...
Cant you see....through my eyes...
Its all a disstense memory
Emollient....my soul...
Disstense me.........me.......mee
Disstense me....
p.s i know Disstense isnt spell correctly but it has a meaning.
YOur absolutely wrong when you said that you couldnt write lyrics, I liked those.
Very gripping lyrics, especially the "painting mistakes over mistakes" part.
It's a really vivid image.
Keep on writing, I'd say!
- Chris
Yes, I really liked the painting verse :)
~Vee
Several spelling errors, but a great structure.
A little house cleaning and your ready for company.
