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BarnaBus RoX
(@barnabus-rox)
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Joined: 18 years ago
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Here I sit in my chair
There you are starring back at me
Bob tells me what to write about
There are times I just want to scream and shout

Log on to Guitar Noise dot com
I know everyone will leave me alone
I 'll try to write that wonderful song
Knowing me it will take so long

I just want to write that hit
Mostly I write a pile of sh......
People will give advise
Value for money it's the price

We can all learn , learn you see
So log on now and come with me
Meet my fiends , there are many
Just beware of Mr K i n g<--Best of all it won't cost a p e n n y "

Log on to Guitar Noise dot com
I know everyone will leave me alone
I 'll try to write that wonderful song
Knowing me it will take so long

Log on log on

log on

Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am


   
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Bennett
(@bennett)
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Posts: 297
 

Couldn't wait 'til next week, huh Hilchy?! LOL!

Nice little fun piece there. Well done mate! :D

From little things big things grow - Paul Kelly


   
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lotto king
(@lotto-king)
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Posts: 777
 

Hey cut it out now you bloody show off

3 songs in 2 todays ? Look out Vic this bloke is after you record what was is now 7 songs in 5 days ?

Why does anyone have to look out for me ... I AM OLD MAN .....bugger you hilch

Here I am being nice to you , you cheeky bugger ...

I don't like the look out for Mr King line , I don't think it flows as well as the rest of that verse ..

"I just want to write that hit
Mostly I write a pile of sh...... "

Why do you constantly put ya self down like that ? I think you might have a confidence problem myself ..

Ok this isn't the best song you have posted nor is it the worst ( mind you it is down there )

Mum and Time were beautifully written songs , definetly not piles of sh.... ( as you put it )

News flash Hilch you are a song writter along with everyone else here .... Get used to being called it , while you write songs like I mentioned

Your status as a writter heightens ...( now thats a good line )

L.K

Aghhhh

Not only am I a senior citizen

I'm now a bloody senior member

Are you people trying to tell me I'm old or what ?

over 700 posts ( I really do need to get out more )


   
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BarnaBus RoX
(@barnabus-rox)
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Joined: 18 years ago
Posts: 2957
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Ok oK old boy

Ill edit that line to read like this ....mmmm ( anything for the King lol )

"We can all learn , learn you see
So log on now and come with me
Meet my fiends , there are many
Best of all it won't cost a p e n n y "

Thanks for the feed back

Hilch :?:

Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am


   
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Bob
 Bob
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Posts: 908
 

Bob tells me what to write about
There are times I just want to scream and shout
Ahh a mention at last - seems to have worked for you this week mate

Bob :wink:

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You are what you eat, eat well


   
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