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+LostBeggining+
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Its been SOOOOO long since ive posted on here its unreal and its also been months n months since i last wrote any kind of lyrics but.....well...thought id check back all me old sites i used 2 go on and i really missed this place...thought id re-visit and have a go....

One Reason Why

We travel down the same path each and everyday
Ribbons of our pasts that get caught up in the fray
We wander on and on as the roads fade to black
With time to waste and songs to sing we never look back

And for all the million answers
And so many reasons why
There is only one reason
That you are here in my life
In my life....

We live out our futures like books weve never read
Remembering the faces and every single word theyve said
For all the years that came crashing down upon our shores
The sea still glistens brightly as the sunlight fades to dawns

And for all the million answers
And so many reasons why
There is only one reason
That you are here in my life
In my life....

...Its to make every moment one that ill never forget
Its to bring a new whole world to life in every silent breath
Its to wake me up and show me all the beauty in this life
Its to show me that in love, there is only one reason why...

And for all the million answers
And so many reasons why
There is only one reason
That you are here in my life
In my life....

I know its quite bad but its been a while...I need to get used to it again lol...

Bye!

NeM H

Rain Shadow


   
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pierson
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I don't know why you would even consider it bad. I guess you are your hardest cridic.

I liked it. Some pretty positive stuff, seemed like you were happy about someone while writing this one!
Its to bring a new whole world to life in every silent breathThat part was great. Keep it up!

There's a thin fine line between hate and rage.
Now watch the line be crossed and break!


   
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Celt
 Celt
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LostBeggining

Not Bad at all!

I love the Chorus.

The only thing I see is it seems a little wordy
in places for my taste.

Ex: The sea still glistens brightly as the sunlight fades to dawns

Is still really necessary I think it would read just as well.

Ex: The sea glistens brightly as the sunlight fades to dawns

If it were me I would reread it and see if I could edit it some.

Or it could just be me and you may need the extra syllable to
make it work musically

Welcome Back

John

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" It's easier than waiting around to die" Townes Van Zandt


   
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