You came like a gale
I followed like a fallen leaf
The sign said for sale
You were hot beyond belief
The first time i met you
You took my heart by surprise
your eyes such a shade of blue
Your smile amidst the swarming flies
i took from Jamir and Tattooed
so, what do ya'll think?
:) i likes what you've done with em... :)
*not thinking that the hot beyond belief reference is about himself* :P
man, i need to start writing for these more...
You came like a gale
I followed like a fallen leaf
The sign said for sale
You were hot beyond belief
The first time i met you
You took my heart by surprise
your eyes such a shade of blue
Your smile amidst the swarming flies
I swear I never noticed you were lying
Time, go backwards, I believed every line
of the whispered conversations
in the shadows of my mind
i took from Jamir, scratch, and Tattooed