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Picklegirl week 26


(@ruepickle)
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You came like a gale
I followed like a fallen leaf
The sign said for sale
You were hot beyond belief

The first time i met you
You took my heart by surprise
your eyes such a shade of blue
Your smile amidst the swarming flies

i took from Jamir and Tattooed

so, what do ya'll think?


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(@acceptedone)
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Joined: 18 years ago
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:) i likes what you've done with em... :)

*not thinking that the hot beyond belief reference is about himself* :P

man, i need to start writing for these more...


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(@anonymous)
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Joined: 15 years ago
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You came like a gale
I followed like a fallen leaf
The sign said for sale
You were hot beyond belief

The first time i met you
You took my heart by surprise
your eyes such a shade of blue
Your smile amidst the swarming flies

I swear I never noticed you were lying
Time, go backwards, I believed every line
of the whispered conversations
in the shadows of my mind

i took from Jamir, scratch, and Tattooed


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