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(@jadiny)
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hey this was quite hard to do but here's my submission anyway. its supposed to be quite bluesy. critisisms welcome aswel as good comments lol.

thanks :D

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my baby umm, my baby umm
my baby has the angel and the demons inside
i asked him why
he has to carry both inside
my darling has the demons and he don't know why

v1
my baby's been through unwise hearts and minds
my baby's been through the unwise hearts and minds
i turned to benny and asked him why
he occupies these demons and he don't know why

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v2
we travelled through looking for a cure
nation after nation they don't care anymore
we even went to his home the poorest of the poor
they didn't wanna know they just don't care anymore

chorus

Keep away from people who try to belittle your ambitions small people always do that, but the really great ones make you feel that you too, can become great.

--Mark Twain


   
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(@katreich)
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I like where you went with this. I'm struggling, and can't help notice everyone is writing "protest songs" this week, for lack of a better description. I like how you incorporated this into a song about an individual.

Falling in love is like learning to play the guitar; first you learn to follow the rules, then you learn to play with your heart.

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(@guitargeek)
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i like the flow of this song...its very unique...when i imagined how it would sound...thats the vibe i got..very original. good job!


   
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(@jadiny)
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katreich thank you for your comment somethings are really hard to write like last weeks assignment which i really couldn't do :oops: any way keep at it.

guitargeek thank you for your comment very much appreciated so thank you :D

Keep away from people who try to belittle your ambitions small people always do that, but the really great ones make you feel that you too, can become great.

--Mark Twain


   
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