Finally wrote a song! After a couple months of not writing! Im really happy I was able to musker up the song! anyway enough blabbering and lets get to the music!
This sogn has a Lynard Skynard feel to it:
Whish You Were Here
(Verse One)
Where did you go?
Why aren't you here?
I don't know
But I need you dear.
(Chorus One)
I need you,
I wish you were here.
(Verse Two)
Need the time to think,
About the days,
Days we have lost,
Now it's a haze.
(Chorus Two)
I'll hold you close,
Hold my dear.
(Bridge)
When did the tides turn?
I'll say again,
What went wrong?
Where should I begin?
(Verse Three)
I never knew how much,
I needed you baby,
Think about ya,
Everyday.
(Chorus One)
I need you,
I wish you were here.
I hope you enjoyed! glad to be back! Feel free to criticise as you like.
Bstguitarist
KB1LQC
it's good.
Hi BST
Good, straightforward song. It's nice when you can pick up the pen again and get something down
Good stuff
Bob :)
You are what you eat, eat well
Thanks! Hopefully I can get an idea for the next song, I havent looked yet. I didnt spend too much time on this song so thts why its a bit straighforward but ill get on the right traks sooner or later. Gotta start reading other peoples posts too.
Bstguitarist
KB1LQC