my first time posting here so please go easy on me. i've been having a hard time finding where to start in songwriting so i thought i go here and maybe it'll inspire me and i wanted to get good at it. criticism is very welcome.
Ode to my Fallen
[verse]
the autumn leaves are falling
signs of winter are starting
why did you leave me so
left in a world of sorrows
[chorus]
blind to the dawn
you left me all alone
an island of haunting nights
the fallen sings of sorrow
[verse]
the sleeping beautys sleeping
an eternal night of resting
no prince can wake her up
the magick all but gone
Good stuff. You really painted a picture in this song. Keep posting and writing songs. I always look forward to seeing new songwriters progress.
I do think this song belongs in the songwriting club, though. (I did the exact same thing when I was new!) You should also join sunday song writing and follow some of the lessons. ssg is a great way to practice and share your work. Keep it up!
There's a thin fine line between hate and rage.
Now watch the line be crossed and break!
